Selasa, 12 April 2016

Letter of Opinion

 


Dear Ms Callistasia,

I am writing to comment an article of yours that published in The Jakarta Post on 9 April 2016 "KPK to question Ahok on disputed land procurement".
In my opinion the Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) has to resolve this case as soon as possible; because if they don’t, it will give more bad impact for some parties that involved in this case.
In addition, most of citizen will easily influenced by any rumors from any other mass media.
However, I expect the cooperation of Mr. Ahok in answering the questions will give some clues to resolve this case.

Nadia R Amelia
Special Region of Yogyakarta 

2 komentar:

  1. 'will easy to be influenced' i think it should be
    'will easily influenced' cmiiw ^^

    BalasHapus
  2. ...published on...
    ...in my opinion, the Corruption Eradication Commission (KPK) has to solve this..
    ...some citizens will be easy to be influenced by rumors that spread on medias.
    Imo you'd better split the last paragraph into two sentences.

    Cmiiw. Your opinion is simple and neat, i really like it😁

    BalasHapus

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