Nether Event Organizer
28 Whitechapel Court
The Netherlands
March 20, 2016
Nike, Inc.
Colosseum 1
1213 NL Hilversum
The Netherlands
Attention: Marketing Service Department
We have an annual event, Midnight Color Run, that would be held this March. Your sponsorship last year was very helpful and made the event a great success. This year we have a plan to give decent shoes for homeless children that will be given by all of the committees, participants, and also sponsor.
We would like to request your support as a sponsor again. In line with the purpose, we will include your logo in every media promotion as our main sponsor.
If you have any questions you could contact me at 555-666-777.
We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Nadia Rizki Amelia
28 Whitechapel Court
The Netherlands
March 20, 2016
Nike, Inc.
Colosseum 1
1213 NL Hilversum
The Netherlands
Attention: Marketing Service Department
We have an annual event, Midnight Color Run, that would be held this March. Your sponsorship last year was very helpful and made the event a great success. This year we have a plan to give decent shoes for homeless children that will be given by all of the committees, participants, and also sponsor.
We would like to request your support as a sponsor again. In line with the purpose, we will include your logo in every media promotion as our main sponsor.
If you have any questions you could contact me at 555-666-777.
We are looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Nadia Rizki Amelia
In first paragraph, I think it will be more appropriate when you use "the/that event" rather than "this event"
BalasHapusBesides, your writing is great. I like it (｡’▽’｡)♡
I think 'we will appear your logo' will better replaced with 'we will attach your logo'. Overall, good letter :3
BalasHapus"...last year was very helpful. It made..."
BalasHapus"...homeless children. They will be given by..."
Nice letter, sis😁
good letter. However, i suggest you to add "the" in "all of committee" > all of the committee
BalasHapus